Dripping blood,
ink on paper.
She told you to wait
and you believed her.
Scratch marks and battle scars,
there’s no way to dodge it.
It’s written in the stars.
Scribbled letters and torn pages,
She told you to leave that night
and your heart unsteadily races.
She used her web on you
to pull up the unreachable parts.
Now look at what’s left of you:
Shattered bones and a broken heart.
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Really interesting cadence here. That stutter of lines six …. crisp and cool
hi! thanks for checking out my stuff. I want it to sound kind of raw and short. 🙂